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Teddy Bear
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Always there to comfort me-
to lay my head and cry.
Tear drops falling on you-
as I sit and wonder why.
Just to hold you in my arms-
just to hold you with my might.
Some how always makes me better-
on a cold and lonely night.
To cry to you with all my problems-
to really feel you care.
Just calms me down through all the times-
the world can be unfair.
To lay down my head, and fall asleep-
and try to dry a tear.
Knowing when I wake, it'll be alright-
you'll always still be here.
Something to have, that will never leave-
is really just so rare.
But you're always here to comfort me-
My Precious Teddy Bear.
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ShadowsCloud
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2003-01-25 09:00:00]
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Re: Teddy Bear
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by gina on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 11:02:52 AM AEST
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aww this is so sweet ...
interested to know what your Teddy Bear thinks of you ? i guess u wanna know that..check my poem "Look Who's Talking " to find out :)
GINA |
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Re: Teddy Bear
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by tier on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 02:35:07 PM AEST
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| it is very good adn well worded.... |
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Re: Teddy Bear
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:14:54 PM AEST
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| Really cute poem ... good write. |
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Re: Teddy Bear
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 10:10:54 PM AEST
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| awwww...hehe ,,a really cute poem and very well written! A heart warmer.....Well done :o) Larry |
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Re: Teddy Bear
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 30th January 2003 @ 07:50:13 PM AEST
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Right Candice,
That's it! I've decided, I'm coming back as a Teddy Bear!Hehe
Great write about the one who can be trusted with all. It' a good job they can't talk back though!! Well not many can!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Teddy Bear
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by ShadowsCloud on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 12:04:33 AM AEST
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Dean,
Although this poem was written about my favorite Teddy Bear that is about 2 feet tall, really soft and fluffy, and purple which is my favorite color. It also reminds me of Shadow for the way tha he has been there for me kind of like my Teddy Bear. I am glad that you like my poem. I really enjoyed writing it.
ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Teddy Bear
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 08:59:39 PM AEST
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| I Like This. It Was Cute. |
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