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Thoughts of love
Contributed by
lady-quiet-dreamer
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Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:56:58 PM in AEST
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A quiet wonder is the love I have found. To some love is an obligation. To others a right. To me it is a givt to be held dear. I never asked to fall in love neither will I ask for it to be taken away from me. when i think of how it happened i smile. Maybe this isn't love. I don't care. I won't change it
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Re: Thoughts of love
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 07:04:51 PM AEST
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Not bad, but it would be better served by being in verse format. Experiment more with line breaks, and in time you'll find the best way to lay out a poem.
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Re: Thoughts of love
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:06:11 PM AEST
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| nice poem:) |
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