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Mirror...
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:09:15 PM in AEST
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I live on a acre of land.
I saw an actor who looked like someone I knew.
I added that the actor was cute.
But after that I didnt see it anymore in the mirror.
It made me get angry cause i didnt see him anymore.
I didnt have a answer why I got angry when I didnt see it anymore.
Then I saw this bachelor and he told me it was him that I seen in the mirror.
Then the bachelor told me worked as a banker.
Then the bachelor told me had to go to the barber cause he's hair was gettting too long.
I took a beater from all of this and I took a breather ,I guess I wasnt a good guesser after all.
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Re: Mirror...
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by lady-quiet-dreamer on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:23:11 PM AEST
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| a very good poem :) |
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Re: Mirror...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 01:51:43 PM AEST
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i like that ending, u know one need only take the time 2 read your work and they will find there's more 2 your writting than meets the eye, well done . . .
Ben |
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Re: Mirror...
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 07:52:10 PM AEST
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| Mirrors do not lie, yet sometimes we must open up our eyes and truly see. No need to guess, its all right there before each and everyone of us. Your poem has so many angles, a very brilliant write, a wake up call. Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Mirror...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 04:44:47 AM AEST
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I like this. I can't say I know exactly what it means but then I should not have to. Poetry to me is a lot about emotions and you express your emotions well. :-)
Take care and thank you for sharing.
Tim
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Re: Mirror...
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by missprint on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 09:50:22 PM AEST
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I liked this. very nice choice of words.
the last line is very good.
nice work! |
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