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Stupid Girl
Contributed by
Jazzy
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Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 05:47:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She woke up this morning with her eyes feeling puffy,
looking in the mirror she remembered she had been crying the night befor...
Ha !! you stupid girl , she thought...
Things were great, it had only been a month ,
but she was his girl and that was the best...
After many weeks of telling her she was the only one
and if anything came up he'd forsake all the rest.
Oh ! the things that she had planned for them,
and all the fun that they should have
A new relationship should be exciting for them
but the excitement didn't last
it soon turned into her waiting for him to call her on the phone
crying in her bed at night ... crying all alone
for the first time in her life she wanted to speak her mind
and when she told him they needed to talk about them
he said " if it's over, then thats fine"
according to him she was to needy to clingy,
but how could that be so??
when all she did was wait for him to fall for her
why didnt he ?? now she doesn't even want to know..
so that night she went to bed and cried herself to sleep
she remember all the good times that she would always keep
woke up in the morning with her eyes feeling puffy
her pillow still a little damp and her nose all red and stuffy
walked over to the mirror and said to herself "Ha you stupid girl !!"
Copyright ©
Jazzy
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2005-12-21 17:47:15]
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Re: Stupid Girl
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by Marko on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 05:51:52 PM AEST
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| Very good i could feel the emotion you have talent and you will go far. Godd job Excellenta |
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Re: Stupid Girl
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 05:52:32 PM AEST
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That happen's to alot of young girls
thinking they have the right guy and to
come to find out it was all a lie!!! Nice poem,
but sad. |
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Re: Stupid Girl
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:08:53 PM AEST
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| welcome to ypdc^_^ |
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Re: Stupid Girl
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by Poser on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 09:53:11 PM AEST
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| I know how that's like, except for the fact that I'm a guy, and she was a girl... |
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Re: Stupid Girl
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:33:23 AM AEST
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This was a good poem. It was painful and sad..
take care
christina |
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