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Thoughts and dreams
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 03:39:21 AM in AEST
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Everything is distorted in the rain...
I wish it would last forever
drenching me in it`s beauty
with the language of the sky
found in the soft music of the foreign breeze
it`s harsh and bitter discord
just right for me
Looking through eyes
of stained glass windows
letting in just enough light
yearning to release such dreams
to a world outside I do not know
trapped in my cathedral
with a shattered stained glass soul
releasing heaven to fall
satisfying curiosity
so I may wake from dreamless sleep
as nothing can exist on it`s own
and forever can come together
with death and a dream
to help me catch a raindrop
for it is so elusive to hold
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2005-12-21 03:39:21]
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Re: Thoughts and dreams
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by The_Phantom on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:31:39 PM AEST
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Interesting write, well done with the randomness, I enjoyed the poem thanks.
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Re: Thoughts and dreams
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by Jen54 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 06:20:07 PM AEST
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Very nice write. I love the part when you wrote
"to a world outside i do not know
trapt in my cathedral
with a shattered stained glass soul" it made my stomach drop for a moment. Great job keep it up.
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Re: Thoughts and dreams
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:34:13 PM AEST
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| Yes, rain can blur, fog can blind. Do not let your heart be deceived, ensnared by distorted images. Beautiful right, I thank you. Raquel Leah |
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