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My last fall...
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:59:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Im weak in you
you break me
force me down
I struggle
for footing
and fail
trying
to accomplish
this one thing
anything....
useless corpse
wasted space
standing
so close
to the edge
blowing wind
calling me...
teasing me...
daring me...
you make me weaker
looking downward
on this my joyous end...
away from you
dizzing hieghts
swaying in the wind
calling to me
holding me
so close
to the edge
leaning towards
my salvation
rushing up
my escape
faster faster
I flee from you
the wind craddles me
we go together
awaiting this
the final
moment
of release
from you
only wishing
no ending
for
my last fall
Copyright ©
holderofthestone
... [
2005-12-21 02:59:53]
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Re: My last fall...
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by SocialMisfit on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 03:45:55 AM AEST
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beautiful poem of pain and anguish....well done.
SM |
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Re: My last fall...
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:15:07 AM AEST
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wow, full of self insight and depth.
I lke the shortness of the lines, it adds to the feeling of desperation, almost like sobbing.
Interesting ending too, clever! |
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Re: My last fall...
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by brew on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 06:02:43 PM AEST
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Very well penned Chris
Hope you can find what you are looking for.
Happy Holidays
Brew~ |
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Re: My last fall...
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by amaya_h_k on
Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 12:26:22 PM AEST
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| I like it, it stirs up emotions in me that I ignore most of the time. |
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