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Living to CRY
Contributed by
stecks
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Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:20:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wanting to die,
Trying to stay fly,
Never letting me fry,
Living as cupids spy,
Never getting high,
Drinking till I lie,
She still passing me by,
This is why,
Im Living to cry.
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stecks
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2005-12-20 23:20:31]
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Re: Living to CRY
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by blacksabbath026 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 12:59:13 AM AEST
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| its a good poem, i can imagine how hard it is to write with 9 of the same rhymes |
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Re: Living to CRY
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 02:06:08 AM AEST
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| this was a good poem. |
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Re: Living to CRY
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by Candice on
Wednesday, 21st December 2005 @ 08:30:39 AM AEST
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"She still passes me by"
Don't I know how you feel!
Don't live to cry thow live for water sports or something along those lines. |
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Re: Living to CRY
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th January 2007 @ 07:47:14 PM AEST
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| short and to the point, yet it still describes a lot. Great job! |
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