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i wish i had the guts to say what needs to be said
Contributed by
needs_change
on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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please sit next to me
i've got something to say
i'm not sure how to put this
i've tried everyway
i know that this sounds stupid but
not telling you seems wrong
i'm not sure what to say now
so just go along
i've been in love
since the first time i layed eyes
upon your perfect figure
i was mesmerized
the your way hair hides your face
from the rest of the world
ever since that moment
i have longed to be that girl
the one that holds you hand
and talks to you on the phone
your all i can think about
i can't leave this alone
your skins so milky white and
your eyes the darkest blue
i know that this sounds crazy but
i'm so in love with you
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2005-12-20 19:45:00]
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Re: i wish i had the guts to say what needs to be said
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by DesolantDreamer on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:24:06 PM AEST
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| BEAUTIFUL! PERFECT! I couldn't have done it better! Heh, I might borrow it because it seems like the perfect way to tell this guy that I love him. OF COURSE I would say you wrote it. I may be in Japan, but I still follow copywrite laws! :) very good write! |
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Re: i wish i had the guts to say what needs to be said
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by Kami on
Saturday, 4th February 2006 @ 07:58:05 PM AEST
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| very nice! I can definetly relate to it and like it a lot |
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