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Child's Eyes
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 07:18:31 PM in AEST
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The snow was deep
Sparkling in the dim light
More falling gently to the ground
A spot by a bridge over creek
Where ducks made their home
Silence here could be found
A more serene spot
I may never see again
As I stood with arms to sky
Catching snowflakes
On my tongue
Once more I saw with child’s eyes
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2005-12-20 19:18:31]
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Re: Child's Eyes
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 07:21:07 PM AEST
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Shari this is so peaceful and serene its always good to see through the childs eyes
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Re: Child's Eyes
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by cashncoe on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:16:57 PM AEST
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great job
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Re: Child's Eyes
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 09:08:23 PM AEST
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| Beautiful Poem, yes, I can taste those flakes on my childs tongue, once long ago, and your write brings me back to those times, lovely, I thank you.. RL : D : P |
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