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Tears to stain the page...
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 03:29:10 PM in AEST
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Every candle in her heart
is flickering in my eye
I knew that from an early start
she would make me try
To be the artist that i am
with tears to stain the page
Her love will help me stand
and place paint upon the stage
I want her to soon to know
she's the girl of my designs
The colours in the snow
and the passion in my lines..
I'll paint her sleeping quietly
and show her my desire
I love her more than mildly
cause now my heart's a fire...
dw
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Re: Tears to stain the page...
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by DesolantDreamer on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 03:39:51 PM AEST
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| That is a very sweet and heartfelt write. I am glad for you. I hope one day soon I, too, will have the joy of caring so much...and being cared for. Keep her close, because you will never experience such a pain as losing her. Trust me, I may be a 15 year old girl in Japan, but I know love and loss. My prayers are with you and your love. |
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Re: Tears to stain the page...
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by lostrelic on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 03:41:37 PM AEST
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a very touching write good job
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Re: Tears to stain the page...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 03:57:23 PM AEST
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Oh Dwayne a much happier write by you. A remarkably penned piece of poetry filled with ur hearts deepest love. I wish u all the best my dear friend cos u deserve the best that life has to offer. May this love u share with ur girl be blest with a lifetime of eternal happiness my friend. Well done Dwayne.
*hugs for u*
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Re: Tears to stain the page...
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 24th December 2005 @ 07:12:26 PM AEST
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Hey Dwayne! Good to see you back!
This is a very nice dedication to someone who is clearly quite special to you. Always great when someone can bring a positive change to your life. Nice rhyme scheme and flow to this. Those last two lines are so sweet : )
Scorp. |
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