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Only Promise Kept
Contributed by
Elayner27
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Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 01:03:38 PM in AEST
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She walks into the empty black.
Yelling, she whispers ‘is anyone there?'
No one answers, she believes she's alone.
But beyond the darkness, they watch.
Not saying anything, they snicker.
Knowing she'll never know,
Alone she walks, never knowing.
–Until she met him there.
He told her the truth and it hurt.
He showed her the light and promise.
She took him by the hand,
To be engulfed in this (his) light.
But he deceived her, as did the light.
The only promise made was DEATH.
As that is the only promise ever kept.
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Re: Only Promise Kept
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 01:06:27 PM AEST
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Sad but very thought provoking write.
huggs,
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Re: Only Promise Kept
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by GAMEchief on
Tuesday, 9th January 2007 @ 04:55:34 PM AEST
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| A little too dark for my tastes. |
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