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A tear
Contributed by
jonteD
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How long does it take for a tear to fall,
To start crying when life makes you small,
Are you alone, the only one to feel hurt,
When your lover walks with hollow smirk.
Why does the rest of the world laugh aloud,
You breath heavy but all the tears shroud,
What resides really deep inside your head,
That your lover has another now instead.
Every time you close your eyes you recall,
Moments of togetherness, forget it you fool,
But you can’t shut it out, still they stay,
And, yes, forever that image will be that way.
Time is no healer because in the dead of night,
You will awaken, sweating, full of fright,
As you try to reach the image clear in your mind,
Your lover so very close but leaving you behind.
The next time you make love it won’t seem right,
Because all the time all you will have in sight,
Is the image of a lover who is no longer there,
The one who with a smile left you with a tear.
Copyright ©
jonteD
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2003-01-25 04:00:00]
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Re: A tear
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by venkat on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:23:31 AM AEST
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| Time will definitely teach you lessons..A good poem..venkat |
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Re: A tear
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:31:59 AM AEST
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I find this very moving ...a beautifully written piece jonte
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Re: A tear
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by gina on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 08:32:54 AM AEST
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touching and sad in beautiful words ...
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Re: A tear
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:21:22 PM AEST
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| A beautifully written poem. |
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Re: A tear
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 03:29:36 PM AEST
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Jonte, this is so beautiful....tho very sad... I miss chatting with you.. and hope all is as well as can be....
Hugs
Jenni |
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