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look at me
Contributed by
jessalynn
on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:07:21 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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When you look at me
What is it that you really see
Am I an angry girl
do you turn around
and laugh at me
do I make you laugh
or scream at me
So do you know
what you think of me
what you want me to be
Am I a selfish one
are you ignoring me
Silently screaming inside of me
Violently ill when your
looking at me
My fevor actions
always falseified me
Copyright ©
jessalynn
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2005-12-20 08:07:21]
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Re: look at me
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:20:50 AM AEST
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Good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: look at me
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by Elayner27 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 11:43:18 AM AEST
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Wow I really like that, I can connect with it a lot. I like the fragments and the stop go flow. And silently screaming, I love that saying I wrote a few poems last year that was based on that one concept. Or like one I wrote a few days ago "Yelling, she whispers" I like that stuff. Well I enjoyed your write, keep it up!
*The One Girl. |
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Re: look at me
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by Jen54 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 04:34:08 PM AEST
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I like it I can relate to it. Keep up the great work.
-Jen |
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