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Do you think i'm a failure?

Contributed by desolated_denial on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 01:36:04 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

A dissapointed charade
Take the spit and swallow it
Take my fist and hold it in
Mommy dearest died again
Failure is all you see
Monkey see Monkey do
Do do do
Monkey makes pretty sounds
but it's still ugly on the inside
Barracaded walls, only for you to crash
and music to drone
Save tits, you're just my dad
Hey dad
Daddy dad dad daddy dad
Mommy held a knife once more
Shiney
Daddy holds a gun to rival her noose
all around my neck for another knot to lose
Tight tight tighter tighter daddy bye
I have another appointment today
Just so I can be late -
and miss it again
Am I still a stupid failure?
Must be all the drugs
Silly imaginary drugs
Walls are closing in as you say the room gets bigger
I failed again to see the smaller picture
Put the hat on to cover my eyes
from this shady corner
Mommy won't you die again tonight?
Mommy mommy mommy
I had plans to fail tonight

Copyright © desolated_denial ... [ 2005-12-20 01:36:04]
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Re: Do you think i'm a failure? (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 05:49:41 AM AEST
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this is heartbreaking and well written, the rawness of the emotion really shows, well done

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