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Broken
Contributed by
misunderstood_gurl
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Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 11:41:09 PM in AEST
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Why am I so broken
And how did you make me this way
I’ve felt like this, ever since
I saw you with her that day
I was so stupid not to notice
But maybe I was just too blind to see
What was right there all along
For, you wanted nothing to do with me
You wanted her, only her
And now my eyes are filled with hate
You ripped my heart up, threw it away
And now there’s nothing left for you to take
You’ve already stripped me everything
And you broken my pride
You left me all alone,
And thought you took away all my places to hide
But you left one place open
And that place is my smile, in which I’m bound
‘Cause I hide behind it all day
And Pray to God I wont be found
Because this smile that I wear
I wear all day long
All because of your heat
For, that is somewhere I don’t belong
Then as soon as I get home
I flash my mom my smile
When I turn, my smile breaks
As I go to my room for a while
No matter how hard I try
I know there will never be a place for me
There’s only one thing that I can do
That’s to watch from afar and dream of you
Why am I so broken
And how did you make me this way
I’ve felt like this, ever since
I saw you with her that day
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Re: Broken
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 11:45:36 PM AEST
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wow.... im not really sure what else to say, except i agree with you, it sounds like it came straight from your heart, and i like how it came out too.... verrryyy good write....
and don't worry, things will get better!!
-Callif |
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Re: Broken
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 12:08:15 AM AEST
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| So Sorry, But the poem is beautifully written and his loss, not yours. |
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Re: Broken
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by bluesbaby811 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 12:11:11 AM AEST
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| Omg!That's a beautifully sad poem!I luve it!I know how you feel!Really! |
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Re: Broken
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 09:51:29 AM AEST
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Aww this is so sad but beautifully written.
Hope you feel much better really soon.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Broken
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by Elayner27 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 12:29:57 PM AEST
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Wow that is awesome, I have a lot of poems about that: broken, hiding behind a smile and hiding. It's weird how it's the same feeling but worded a little bit different but so similer. I think that's amazing. I love it. I love your write.
I'll get Better.
*That One Girl. |
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Re: Broken
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by In_a_while on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 02:36:53 PM AEST
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So heartbreakingly sad....and unbelievably well written
i hope you feel better soon!
"Then as soon as I get home
I flash my mom my smile
When I turn, my smile breaks
As I go to my room for a while"
Honest and heartbreaking.
Take care and chin up, okay? |
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Re: Broken
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by TREBOR on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 04:34:39 PM AEST
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| This is a really strong poem,I hope that by writng it you have begun to move forward,we all deserve a break,particulary liked the recurring use of the 'smile' |
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