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In These Arms
Contributed by
UnprovenPoet
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Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 11:20:13 PM in AEST
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Unforgettable memories provide a sense of closeness.
Now, who is this young lady that I hold in my arms?
She seems so familiar.
I once knew her, loved her.
Who is this young lady that I hold in my arms?
She still whispers “I Love You.”
Unforgettable memories provide a sense of closeness.
She once knew my soul,
My, every, thought
Who is this young lady that I hold in my arms?
It is only a ghost I hold in my arms tonight
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Re: In These Arms
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 11:42:54 PM AEST
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are you sure this was your FIRST poem??
it seems too.... good, to be your first....
great job, i like the way you don't let a rhyme scheme hold you down
hope to see more of your work!
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Re: In These Arms
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 05:24:20 AM AEST
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First poem ever? If that is the case, I do hope that it is not your last.
Also, your screen name is wonderful, but I believe it will be outdated soon.
Take care, and welcome.
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Re: In These Arms
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 08:15:46 AM AEST
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I agree with the other comments. Very good work especially for first one.
Move over fellow poets. We have compatition here
huggs,
emy |
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