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unforgetful birhtday
Contributed by
lifeslittleangel
on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 08:59:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
BirthdayPoems
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the sound of the people in the house syaing hide hide shes here
my mom say forget the bike in the yard ill get it later just get inside
the screaming the people jumping out say surpise
the tears of joy and excitment on my face
the words come out of my mouth to my mother
wheres dad it may have been the worst words to have said
then she says in the living roomwhy he forgot your birthday
and then come the screaming"my mother yelling saying u ***** tell her happy birthday
the glass shattering as it hits the wall and everything is quiet everyone looks at my i look down and the blood falls i look up and then everything goes black
Rip jesse lopez her mother and father fighting killed her (she is not really dead)
" to allp arents your childern are more important than the fighting "
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2005-12-19 20:59:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: unforgetful birhtday
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ari on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 09:02:58 PM AEST (User
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great poem, but I wish you had edited it...all the mistakes make it hard to read...still the point gets across
very poignant |
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