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Another Accident
Contributed by
radstraightedge
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Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 08:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The bullet thats been shot is filling me with fear, and when I see my reflection I can't see through the tears. Maybe it'll hit me or maybe I'll evade, this death that is quickly coming toward my way. It must have had a laser, this gun that held such scorn, why else would this happen and I wasn't even warned. With the intent to kill it came and fought, the intensity of it's hate, I soon caught. This bullet only seems to be getting more immense, and it's now harder to breath for the air has grown so tense. I want you all to know, my finger mearly slipped, I never meant to kill myself, especially not like this.
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Re: Another Accident
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by Jen54 on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 08:11:21 PM AEST
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intense poem. I liked when you said
I want you all to know, my finger mearly slipped, I never meant to kill myself, especially not like this.
This part hit me really hard cause I had a friend shoot herself. Keep up the great writing.
-Jen |
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Re: Another Accident
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by MsLindaLou on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 08:17:50 PM AEST
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This is an extremly powerful poem.
And I love your voice.
It really hits emotional points. |
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Re: Another Accident
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by Elayner27 on
Tuesday, 20th December 2005 @ 12:52:40 PM AEST
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| Wow I love the flow and the way it's set up and the subtle ryming. I loved the ending and the first sentence. Great write. Awesome. |
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