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Where is Lunch
Contributed by
CaseyRedman
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Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 05:51:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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WHERE IS LUNCH,
yes it's lunch time again
and i'm hungry my friend
WHERE IS LUNCH,
I can wait no longer
my hunger only grows stronger
WHERE IS LUNCH,
I can smell the aroma in the air
i'm so hungry it's not fair
WHERE IS LUNCH,
but I don't need food served in a bowl
I need food served for my soul
so WHERE IS LUNCH
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CaseyRedman
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2005-12-19 17:51:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Where is Lunch
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 06:05:50 PM AEST (User
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this is creative and we all at times need the food for the soul.
hugsssss
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Re: Where is Lunch
(User Rating: 1 ) by ButchHoward on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 07:47:36 PM AEST (User
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This piece of work is outstanding; not only in content, but in meter and structure. The reader is pulled into the poem through the familiar gastronomical and olfactory senses, --impossible to resist, then it throws us back into the intellectual reality we all face.
"So Where Is Lunch?"
Butch Howard |
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