|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Lies and Goodbyes
Contributed by
desolantDreamer
on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:27:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
I cried for you
I died for you
What kind of payment is this?
I fled for you
I bled for you
And what do you return for the sacrifices I made?
A laugh and a knife
Stabbing into my back
I broke my honor for you
I sold my soul for you
All my pride
All my faith
All of me
I gave to you
And you just use me
Abusing me
Refusing me the one thing I ask
What crap is that?
Where is your honor?
You are lower than low
Scum to even scum
Yet even in my fury
I weep for you
I seep for you
I am a sap for you
You live in trickery
Lies and more lies
I don't even know you anymore
All your falsehoods
All your lies
Surround you in a blaze of hate
Fooling me
You rip me apart with your lies
Shreding the only friend you have
The only one that won't give up on you
The only one that is trying to help you
You make me cry
You make me try
But I cannot keep doing this
I'm sick of your lies
I'm tired of your no good alibies
So here are my goodbyes
Copyright ©
desolantDreamer
... [
2005-12-19 13:27:47]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Lies and Goodbyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:55:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Oooh...so hateful! Whoever this is about better have felt that. That stings. Great word choice! |
|
|
Re: Lies and Goodbyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 03:22:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Ouch.. You can feel ur hate and anger through ur words.It's better that u got it off ur chest. Great flow and very well penned. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
|
|
Re: Lies and Goodbyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:50:05 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
great way to vent it, by writing about it.. I liked this alot and it was well written and the flow it was just amazing..
happy holidays!!!
christina |
|
|
Re: Lies and Goodbyes
(User Rating: 1 )
by SmileSkinDeep on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 08:22:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
glad you can let go. hopefully forever, sounds like you gave a lot, just keep moving on
-april |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
