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pain like blood
Contributed by
fayeelizibeth
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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blood
like liquid
pain
like sharp
flame
like searing
death
like dripping
caress
like acidic
depressed
like, less
and the way you feel
like, less
depressed
like acidic
caress
like dripping
death
like searing
flame
like sharp
pain
like liquid
blood
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expression of the pain
thier expression
your expression
as architects erect
as sculpurs sculpt
as painters paint
isn't this the same?
are you insane?
when you see the blood,
blood like liquid pain
dripping down
like red red rain
dripping down
blood like liquid pain
when you see the blood
are you insane?
isn't this the same?
as painters paint
as scuptors sculpt
as archetetects erect
your expression
thier expression
expression of the pain
* * *
blood like liquid pain
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2003-01-25 01:40:00]
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Re: pain like blood
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by HeartShapedBox on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 12:30:20 PM AEST
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| wow....that's all I have to say....wow, can I relate. |
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Re: pain like blood
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by fancyface4898 on
Friday, 7th February 2003 @ 10:14:52 PM AEST
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| very interesting |
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