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Song of Life
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Can we tell what may happen to us in this strange medley of Life?
Why do some beings live in bliss; and yet some only raw strife?
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What we do with it, how we take it, is that not what counts in the end?
Life, 'tis it the thing held dearest, within' only the love one sends?
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Should we feel inherently validated to seek and ascertain Life's truth?
Yet, questioning of Life's purpose, we need eloquence and honest couth..
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What melody or beauty gives that which excites Life's vigor and spirit?
Life is it in ones soul, or heart, or with the ears must one hear it?
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As Life brings questions to us, each fall, spring, winter and summerlong,
Should we not experience these things, in all manner of Life's song?
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ladyfawn
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2003-01-25 01:00:00]
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Re: Song of Life
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by venkat on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:04:17 AM AEST
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| O ! my dear Lady..The poem is very beautiful. ... It is very interesting... venkat |
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Re: Song of Life
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 07:27:07 AM AEST
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My dear Nessa
This is indeed very beautiful...full of truth and food for thought. It's good to be reading your work again.
Much love
Chrissie xx |
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Re: Song of Life
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:19:56 PM AEST
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Nice couplets. Life is indeed a mystery.
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Ramfire |
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Re: Song of Life
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by Cynthia on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 04:42:14 PM AEST
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| We should experience everything life has to offer. This is a very good poem. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Song of Life
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by PhantomsLDY on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 10:24:32 PM AEST
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| This is a very beautiful poem and so well written |
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Re: Song of Life
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 12:34:29 AM AEST
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You pose some interesting questions in this poem I enjoyed this it was very beautiful and well thought out.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Song of Life
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by Chef-Boy-R-C on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 03:18:16 PM AEST
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| This poem was very good and very deep. I enjoyed reading this poem, because it had so much truth to it. Take care and God Bless.... |
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