|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
In my mind
Contributed by
xXxmegsxXx
on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:19:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
|
a wilting rose
a dying dream
things no longer
as they seem
a fading hope
empty words
the coldest night
and flightless birds
the dying sun
growing darkness
enternal pain
and heavy sadness
this is what
is in my mind
but soon I'll die
and leave these thoughts behind
Copyright ©
xXxmegsxXx
... [
2005-12-18 17:19:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: In my mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:25:21 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Well I certainly hope u don't check out any time soon 'cause u r a good writer.
huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: In my mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 06:27:08 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
nicceee... Its hard to get rid of these thoughts... Ill keep u in my prayers,
BEBE |
|
|
Re: In my mind
(User Rating: 1 )
by tiggytom on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 05:51:37 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Great expression, loved this, steady flow.
Tom :) |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
