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Drowning in Depression
Contributed by
Chanti
on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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So deep, im drowning,
in an ocean of despair,
dont save me, dont love me,
for soon, i wont be there,
this razor, this gun,
could cost me my life,
but it just doesnt matter,
its not worth the strife,
just kill me, you hate me,
i know that you do,
no one, can love me,
i mean it, its true,
maybe im too sweet,
maybe im cruel,
but one thing ill never be,
is a depressing fool,
to see the world act,
like they know so much,
even though theyve never even,
felt depressions touch,
even though theyve never,
cried themselves to sleep,
they still act like they know,
but they will never know me,
dont feel sorry when im gone,
you never cared before,
to see thinking i was happy,
i made my heart so sore,
please dont act like you love me,
you never did, you never will,
but when i need to leave you,
somehow i know...
ill miss you still.
Copyright ©
Chanti
... [
2003-01-25 00:20:00]
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Re: Drowning in Depression
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 02:08:04 AM AEST
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Wow this was so sad... I don't even know what to say this was so well written and such a heart rending poem. Beautiful.
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Re: Drowning in Depression
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by venkat on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:48:31 AM AEST
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| it Is very sad..venkat |
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Re: Drowning in Depression
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by Linny on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 05:17:48 PM AEST
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Wow, somehow its like you know how I feel sometimes. It really touched me and it doesnt beat around the bush. You wrote from your heart and the heart of many others as well.
~Linny |
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Re: Drowning in Depression
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by Fiona on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 03:06:17 AM AEST
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| Wow, this poem is amazing...I am speechless, you wrote it so well and it was just so deep. Amazing. |
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Re: Drowning in Depression
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by Delusions on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 05:28:43 AM AEST
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THis was awsome... wonderfully written and full of passion! Keep it up! ~delusions~
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Re: Drowning in Depression
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by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 10:24:02 AM AEST
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i can totaly relate to this, it seems to be pretty much the style i right in... dark that is, amazing...
broken skin
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Re: Drowning in Depression
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by Pompous on
Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 08:14:37 AM AEST
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| Thats so sad...but its amazing. |
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