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Magic Land
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:18:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Hush now listen can you hear
Fairy queen is drawing near
She will take you by the hand
Fly you to her magic land
Floating through the air so free
Many things for you to see
Moon and stars and fireflies
Wipe the sleep from out your eyes
She will take you to a lake
Sail a boat of lemon cake
Fountain there for you to drink
Foaming milk of strawberry pink
Lie beneath marshmallow skies
Wait there for your next surprise
Unicorn for you to ride
Merlin, wizard is your guide
Wander through a chocolate wood
And if you are very good
You will see a dragon there
Watch his flame, the nostrils flare
Can you hear your mother call
Cascade down that waterfall
Back to sleep you sleepy head
Wake up safe within your bed
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-12-18 17:18:39]
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Re: Magic Land
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:31:53 PM AEST
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Very magical write.
I'll take a big chunk of chocoalet if u don't mind.
Huggs, smiles, Happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: Magic Land
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 10:08:38 AM AEST
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weeeeee! i'm a kid again this was a refreshing experience ros, as beautiful as ever . . .
Ben |
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Re: Magic Land
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by Marko on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:50:51 PM AEST
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| EXCELLENT i could feel the imagination it was like reading charlie and the choclate factory good work gwenevere |
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Re: Magic Land
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by RandyMan on
Thursday, 16th February 2006 @ 01:36:02 PM AEST
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| A beautiful dream. Now the kid may need to see a dentist for the cavities, lol. Exellent write. |
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Re: Magic Land
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by candysears on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 05:24:28 PM AEST
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Brilliants reveals again...I love it.
God Bless!.
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