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Words fall short
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 03:12:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I wish you'd appear once in awhile
Because you lift me up
I wish you'd make some time for me
And maybe show me something
If you do care
You have a funny way of showing it
I know where you are
When I'm dreaming
I'd tell you myself
But the words fall short
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Re: Words fall short
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 03:24:37 PM AEST
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| Wow...there are several ways to look at this one, which is one of the qualities of true poetry....congrats and keep up the good work! |
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Re: Words fall short
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 04:59:00 PM AEST
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| Very often our answer to the question is right before our eyes, we just can't see it.We don't always get the answer we want but the one that is right.The caring is there I'm sure just not in the waty you expect,Good luck, Ros |
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Re: Words fall short
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:18:16 PM AEST
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| This was a good poem. The truth lies in front of your eyes, and infront of yourself. Sometimes you might have to figure it out for yourself. I can relate to it. SLipSiX. |
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