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HUMAN RACE:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 11:31:27 AM in AEST
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We are all people of different color,size and shape.
why should it be a problem for you
if i'm of a different race ,am i in your face,
eating of your plate ,coming to your work late.
one race one people one God one place.
we are all part of the human race
living under God loving grace
i want the world to hear me say
we are living under GOD almighty grace,
love is the power of our faith.
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-12-18 11:31:27]
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Re: HUMAN RACE:
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by kerrah681 on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 11:35:17 AM AEST
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| Really loud and clear, I enjoyed this one, I think you made mme stand up and shout while reading this, excellent poem, it makes me think alot about how stupid and difficult this world can be. |
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Re: HUMAN RACE:
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by tiggytom on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 11:41:35 AM AEST
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I like the premise behind this piece,
well done
Tom :)
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Re: HUMAN RACE:
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by thumper on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 12:21:27 PM AEST
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I love the message. I feel the same way. Love people for who they are and not what they are.
Good work. Peace
Thumper ;o) |
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Re: HUMAN RACE:
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:29:10 PM AEST
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| Hm I really don't know what to say about this poem. The way it was expressed kind of surprised me. But I will try to make something of it. It sounds like people are being hated for everything they are, such as them being took advantage of in any way. That's what I made of it. Oh yeah and the fact that people take advantage of the True One's how do I say it, the true ones Forgiveness. I've been religously abused, so I chose not to use the name God. Just to say. SLipSiX. |
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