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Lost without you
Contributed by
Inspirational101
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Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 05:29:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Without you I feel really lost
Without you I can't even breath
I'm telling the truth when I say
That I'm lost without you
I need your love to survive
To even breath
When we're together
I feel complete
You always make me laugh
You always keep a smile on my face
I dont know how u do it
But you do
You probably don't know it
But being with you,
Just talking to you
Makes me feel the happiest I've ever felt
I don't know how you do it
But you do
All I know is,
Im lost without you
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Inspirational101
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2005-12-18 05:29:09] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost without you
(User Rating: 1 ) by jdawg on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 06:22:01 AM AEST (User
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loved the poem.. i can relate.. well i used to be able to relate..lol. either way.. great poem.. keep it up.
god bless and best wishes
~Justin L.~ |
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Re: Lost without you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:45:10 PM AEST (User
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I loved this poem, I can really relate to how you feel. It was beatiful, the words went along with the stanzas perfectly, it was a very good poem. SLipSiX. *Rose* |
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Re: Lost without you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jen54 on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 07:45:03 PM AEST (User
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Great poem. I could relate to this so well 3 months ago. Awsome write keep it up!!
-Jen |
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