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Cold Fantacy
Contributed by
Kayden
on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 02:45:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Everybody waits fot the right one
Always Hanging on the limb
Holding out their feelings
For someone to take hold
But not me
I have had my fill of Fakes
Takeing you for granted
Snaping your feelings
The "right one"
Doesn't exist
Just a Fantacy
To keep out hopes up
So we don't fall prey
to our own mind
To keep it out there
so we don't have to deal with it
Then all of a sudden
A dark, cold feeling grasps your mind
Feeding off of your own insecurities
Makeing your heart harder, colder
Don't trust anyone
Your victim to your own mistakes
Your feelings break
Love is a fantacy
Keep your hopes up
Copyright ©
Kayden
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2005-12-18 02:45:43]
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Re: Cold Fantacy
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by Mallard8 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:12:50 AM AEST
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It was really good I enjoyed it, I kinda have a similar outlook on life! You should go read and comment Fantasy or Hell, one of my poems...
Scott |
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Re: Cold Fantacy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd January 2006 @ 10:52:44 PM AEST
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| good job. I have similar thoughts on love to. oh and thank you for reviewing me. i really appreciate it. ^^ |
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Re: Cold Fantacy
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by hearts4pain on
Wednesday, 3rd May 2006 @ 09:20:13 AM AEST
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i love this poem. great work.
often we find that we think we are in love. but it comes and goes. and we never know who the next guy/girl will be. if the next time it will be different. if it will be real. or if itll end up the same.
truth is you never know until you find it.
true love does exsist. in family. in friends. in relationships.
when it come to relationships...that guy/girl has to be lover, a friend, and well..family all at the same time.
itll come. youll see.
and your whole world will change |
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