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My Hide-away
Contributed by
desolantDreamer
on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Lost inside my mind
I search for an answer
My heart is shattered
My faith all gone
What is left for me
But this secret hide-away
Where flowers bloom
And I'm free to be myself
No worries no pain
I'm numb to the core
No war no death no hate at all
I'm the only person there is
So free from the world out there
Some say it's insane
To be lost inside your mind
When ever bad things happen
But it's my refuge
I see those horrible things
I know what reality is
But tell the truth
Do you not want a place to escape the horror?
Let me have my peace
My happy place
My hide-away
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desolantDreamer
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2005-12-17 16:12:53]
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Re: My Hide-away
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by Jen54 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:15:17 PM AEST
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This was such a truthful poem. We all have or want that one place to escape from it all. Great write.
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Re: My Hide-away
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 04:46:24 PM AEST
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Very unique, great write.
huggs,
emy
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Re: My Hide-away
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 07:00:23 PM AEST
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I think about this when im dreaming, well of course this is only a dream world, so where else better to do it? lol nice write... i sleep to dream, it always work, puts me in a hpy mood, and makes me want to find this magical, perfect palce.... great job
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Re: My Hide-away
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 09:50:51 AM AEST
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truthful and honest.. nice write..
christina |
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