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The Urge
Contributed by
goldenbutterfly
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Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 PM in AEST
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Throbbing veins and blood shot eyes he walks
His veins throbbing, throbbing so much that he cannot control his own movement
Throbbing veins and blood shot eyes he walks
He knows that there will be more than two shadows in the dark , in the dark of his house
continueing in the dark he reaches his window pane the lights are off
There will be more than two shadows in the dark,in the dark of his house
and there is......
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2003-01-24 22:20:00]
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Re: The Urge
(User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on
Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 09:29:46 AM AEST
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| ooooooh what is it? what is it? i liked this short poem. thanks for sharing, left me in ponderment... hehe. |
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Re: The Urge
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:32:22 AM AEST
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| very good...intense...and mysterious. |
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Re: The Urge
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 04:31:41 PM AEST
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| Makes you think, huh? Ambiguity is lovely stuff |
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