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Friend
Contributed by
butterflygirl40
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Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:07:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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A friend
Will give you the last bite,of their candy bar.
Is a present that you can open and again and again.
That's what friends are for.
Copyright ©
butterflygirl40
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2005-12-17 04:07:16]
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Re: Friend
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 10:29:15 AM AEST
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True, nice, short, & sweet. So much said with so few words. I love it. It's great!
Tim
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Re: Friend
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:23:15 PM AEST
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| Aw, was vry cute, heh, lovd it. |
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Re: Friend
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by Spike on
Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 08:15:49 AM AEST
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I did like it. Such genuine sentiment, to which I totally agree. No need for the comma in line 2.
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