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Endless.
Contributed by
xnoybis
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Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 03:13:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Deal out the cards
What do we have
Of face?
Of value?
An everglade
Of everlaid
Dispositions
And positions
Between us we have
An endless surmise
Of anything under
These shared skies
We play a hand
We divide the land
We constantly wonder
Where it is we stand
We stand where ever
We stand forever
So why can we not
Stand here together?
Fools for the detail
We constantly flail
Batting away reason
Until we force it to fail
Why are we caught
With such short eyes?
When we could be beginning
To just realize
That real things of matter
Are bigger than us
Why can't we fathom
The thought of endless?
Copyright ©
xnoybis
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Re: Endless.
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by EverlastingDawn on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 07:36:57 AM AEST
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A very interesting poem
The meaning is so powerful
It's written extremely well
Great flow and emotions
Good Write
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Re: Endless.
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by tiggytom on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 07:44:35 AM AEST
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A Fantastic write, I agree wholeheartedly with the premise behind this piece, well done
Tom :) |
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Re: Endless.
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by OzChick on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 11:52:29 AM AEST
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This is profoundly deep. Great rhythm and rhyme scheme. A most enjoyable read.
~Jenny~ |
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Re: Endless.
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:28:02 PM AEST
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Add my name to the list of those that see much logic embedded here. Gah... we're all so obsessed with the now now now! that we often can't see the forest for the trees (and I used "we're" rather loosely there, for the record).
Endlessness. It's a highly appealing perspective to operate from, I'd say.
Finding this thought provoking,
~Snemmy |
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Re: Endless.
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by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 08:43:57 PM AEST
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| Enjoyed this write. Especially the last two stanzas. Peace. Laura |
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Re: Endless.
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 12:53:01 AM AEST
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Mucho wisdom in this write.
huggs,
emy
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Re: Endless.
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by soad811 on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 08:58:05 PM AEST
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great use of intertwining different rhyme schemes. very nice
kudos
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