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JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 10:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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JUST CRYING ON MY SHOULDER,
I FEEL ALL OF THE PAIN,
I'M TRYING TO HELP HER,
THE MESSAGE IS PLANE,
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TELLING ME THE THOUGHTS IN HER HEAD,
BUT I ALREADY KNOW,
HER LIFE IS HANGING BY A THREAD,
SHOULD I TELL HER ITS OK TO GO,
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SHES CRYING INSIDE & OUT,
NO WHERE TO TURN TO,
SO I LET HER SCREAM & SHOUT,
" HOW WILL I MAKE IT THROUGH",
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THERES NOTHING I CAN SAY OR DO,
JUST BE HERE BY HER SIDE,
FOR SOON GOD WILL TAKE YOU,
THERES NO WHERE TO HIDE,
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THE ILLNESS IS GETTING WORSE,
SHE CANT UNDERSTAND,
DID SOMEONE GIVE HER SOME BAD CURSE,
WITH THEIR STRONG WILLED HAND?
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THE DOCTORS TELL HER "ITS A MATTER OF TIME",
WHAT DO YOU REALLY SAY,
LIVING FOR HER IS LIKE A CRIME,
JUST LIVING DAY TO DAY,
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I KNOW THERES A MUCH BETTER PLACE,
THAN WHAT WE HAVE HERE ON EARTH,
THAT NO ONE CAN REALLY TRACE,
ITS A PLACE WE WERE BEFORE OUR BIRTH,
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AS I HELD HER & TOLD HER IT WILL BE O.K,
SHE SMILED JUST TO KNOW,
WHEN IT COMES TIME FOR ME TO GO AWAY,
I WILL BE READY TO GO,
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I TOLD HER DONT YOU DARE FEAR,
FOR GOD WILL SHOW YOU THE WAY,
SO SHE SMILED AGAIN,TO WIPE THE TEAR,
I WILL REMEMBER WHAT YOU SAY,
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WHEN I REACH THE HEAVENS UP ABOVE,
I WILL TELL GOD OF MY PRIDE,,
THAT YOU HELPED ME JOURNEY WITH YOUR LOVE,
TO GET TO THIS OTHERSIDE!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-01-24 22:00:00]
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Mystery_Girl on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 10:56:30 PM AEST
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| Gosh what a sad write Christina.....i dont know what to say........... |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 11:23:21 PM AEST
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| every word made me shed a tear for you and also your friend, stick by her till the end she will need your loving support, thanks for sharing your heart again |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by LovingWhispers on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 11:29:49 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful friend you are....Im so sorry to hear that your friend is going through this but it sounds like their journey is made more easier and peaceful all because of you..Lovely write. |
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by Damien on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:36:23 AM AEST
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Chrissie,
This has really touched my heart. One of the best poems I,ve read.(And thanks for your comment on my poem).-Damien |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Dani on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 09:06:11 AM AEST
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I have a friend to whom doctors said "It's just a matter of time" long ago and he's still alive and beating the odds... as long as she's alive there's still hope... remember that... Beautiful write Christina
~Dani~
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 10:30:30 AM AEST
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A beautiful write for your friend. Wonderful words full of wisdom, love and faith. May God give her spirit comfort and hope. He has already I suspect in a friend like you. Godbless you both.
Russ |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 12:30:39 PM AEST
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you are a good friend and this is a very lovely poem
Shari |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 08:26:06 PM AEST
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omg......
you did the right thing being there..
listening.. my heart is torn..
much love to you, i am lighting a candle for your friend too..
huggs always nessa |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:15:35 AM AEST
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| I hope you and your friend can make it through this Christina. Very sad write. May God bless you both. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Chrissie on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 06:12:32 PM AEST
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You have a huge heart Christina ...this is very moving
Chrissie x |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Ronald on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 07:38:36 AM AEST
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| Hey, thanks for commenting my poem 'You Are The SKy I Fly To...' Anyway, this poem is really very touching and sentimental. I really feel a lot for this piece of poetry you submitted. |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th January 2003 @ 04:30:24 PM AEST
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Leaves me speachless,how horrible,good poetry!
~ HeavenAngel~ |
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Re: JOURNEY TO THE HEAVENS
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:27:20 AM AEST
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| beautiful..... you are a great writer...and friend to this person... everone should be as lucky as your friend to have a friend like you.... |
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