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you sick twisted man
Contributed by
CaseyRedman
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 10:33:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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her daddy gets drunk and leaves her alone
she's only 16 but dammit she's grown
who wants to be "raised" by a man so violent and mean
she carries some of the nastiest scars i've ever seen
when she was thirteen that dirty man raped her
the worst part is that the sick bastard taped her
the pain has stolen her innocence and childhood
having been raped figuratively and literaly of all things good
now she lays in her bed covered in red thanks to suicide
when it's plain to see she wasn't the one who should have died
i've never herd of a man so sadistic and sick
excuse me now i'm on my way to rip off his prick
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Re: you sick twisted man
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by WaterFountainOfTears on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 01:54:42 AM AEST
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| wow this was incredibly angry ... nice show of emotions, although i think the ending was a little abrupt / unnecesary ... good write |
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Re: you sick twisted man
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 02:55:12 AM AEST
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wow!! this was such a emotional write on
this poem... did this really happen? if so that is one sick dad .. good poem.. thanks for sharing it |
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Re: you sick twisted man
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by nannerz on
Monday, 19th December 2005 @ 01:55:28 PM AEST
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