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Im sorry
Contributed by
outlaw_mutiny
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:29:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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as i watch the sunset
***i hold back a tear***
knowing that i hurt the one
***that i hold so dear***
*** *** ***
i told her of my love but
***it was to her disbelief***
now all my heart can feel
***is anguish and grief***
*** *** ***
why do we hurt the ones we love
***this question has no answer***
but the emptiness i feel
***is eating me alive like cancer***
*** *** ***
i wish i could take it all back
***every foolish work i've said***
if you never trust my love
***my heart will feel better ***
with my body dead
*** *** ***
i don't know what you want
***but you deserve the stars and the moon***
i just hope the day comes when you trust my love
***and i hope it's coming soon***
*** *** ***
i can no longer sit here
***depressed and broken hearted***
so lets get out of here and
*** go back to when our love first started***
*** *** ***
*** ***
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2005-12-16 20:29:03]
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Re: Im sorry
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by shelby on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:31:47 PM AEST
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I hope that your roads cross and come back to one another. Your apology so sincere more people need to be this way
I loved the style and flow to this write
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Re: Im sorry
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:26:00 AM AEST
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| awwwwwww how sweet .. i love the sound and flow to this poem:) |
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