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THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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LIFE BEYOND THE DEEP BLUE SEA,
IS ANOTHER WORLD OUT THERE,
UNDER THE WATERS FISH BREED,
WITH PLENTY OF ROOM TO SPARE,
SO LETS KEEP OUR WATERS CLEAN,
THEY TOO NEED TO LIVE,
THE WORLD DOWN UNDER CANT BE SEEN,
BUT THERES MUCH LIFE TO GIVE,
WHALES,SEA LIONS,DOLPHINES & MORE,
THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA,
SO MUCH OF THEM TO EXPLORE,
TO HELP YOU & ME,
SO PLEASE DONT KILL,
MAKE THEM YOUR FRIEND,
GIVE THEM A WILL,
SO IT WONT ALL END,
THE BEAUTY OF THE OCEAN FLOOR,
MUCH TO MY SURPRISE,
WAS ANOTHER OPEN DOOR,
TO SEE WITH MY OWN EYES,
WE NEED TO KEEP THE OCEAN STRONG,
TAKE CARE OF WHAT WE GOT,
TELL WHEN YOU SEE SOMETHING WRONG,
THERES OTHERS THAT MIGHT NOT!
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LOWMAN613
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2003-01-24 21:20:00]
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
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by venkat on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 06:32:01 AM AEST
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| The beauty of the ocean floor is always tremendous .... Yes some thing is wrong in man's attitude towards sea..Poem is thought provoking..nice to read..Venkat |
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
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by Chrissie on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 08:39:55 AM AEST
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A strong message Christina and very well put. Good writing as always
Chrissie x |
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
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by Ramfire on
Saturday, 25th January 2003 @ 01:46:52 PM AEST
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Nice Quatrains! I printed out your poem and will keep it posted so that I can read it each day. I love the sea and want the very best for all that live in it.
Regards,
Ramfire |
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 12:27:23 PM AEST
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very good message
Shari |
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 08:42:12 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, and a very strong message, so many humans only think in terms of their own, they do not feel for the animals and sealife, you have done a lovely thing here in your caring poem, hugs nessa |
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 27th January 2003 @ 11:11:49 AM AEST
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| I love the ocean and the different fish and whales that are in it. Very strong, emotional write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: THE BEAUTY OF THE SEA.
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by Mad-Mancunian on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 03:09:54 AM AEST
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Alas!
Alas!
I have always been fascinated by the sea-perhaps because of my inland habitat. Dang.
If only Bush, Blair and the other monkeys in the cage will pay attention to the environment instead of destroying, nay, detonating it! |
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