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Hastily
Contributed by
Phantomdream
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 05:16:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Hurry hurry
the river begs,
rush rush
the leaves rustle,
hastily hastily
the peppers plead.
Finish so the night may fall,
so the stars may light up,
illuminating the moon
like a glowing pearl.
Hasten your daily chores
so lady night can outdance master sun.
Gladly gladly
I submiss.
Copyright ©
Phantomdream
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2005-12-16 17:16:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hastily
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:54:12 PM AEST (User
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The last word should be "submit". Interesting piece, though. Keep it up.
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