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War Against Myself
Contributed by
radstraightedge
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Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 05:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Explosions from inside erupt with such force, I simply can't believe that I am the source. The chaos thats taking over my head, I know is loud enough to easily wake the dead. If this is the case then why does it seem no one can hear this war but me? It's me against myself, but that's old news, I guess we all know, I'm always going to lose. This fights been going on so long, I now can no longer stand tall and strong. I might give up and I'm starting to lose hope, but by doing this it all only seems to be provoked. I'm not sure what else I could possibly do, but my mind has had enough and is ready to be through.
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Re: War Against Myself
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by Channing on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 12:01:55 AM AEST
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Very well thought out, it seems you are struggling very much with yourself. All people do, you just have to fight your way through.
-Channing- |
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Re: War Against Myself
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by dreamer_luv421 on
Monday, 1st January 2007 @ 10:16:59 PM AEST
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| It takes brilliant talent to write poetrey I have all my life and still after all this time never seem to the point I've gotten everything out of me, this poem can rhyme and make sence, which so many rap songs, and poems do not do, all together this is one of the best poems I've read on this site, none the less the first! |
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Re: War Against Myself
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd January 2007 @ 10:34:59 PM AEST
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| I, as well am fighting a war against myself and losing. I am much weakened and no matter which way it goes, i am destined to suffer. I am sure many others here can relate. A Great poem! |
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