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So Alone
Contributed by
gracen2260
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Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 03:22:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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In the grim darkness of night I stand
shrouded in the shadows alone and so cold
no friends when I was young
and none when I'm gray and old.
Flawed by the judgment of others
judged for all my flaws
I try so hard to fit in
but I'm fighting a lost cause
The silence of night broken by my crying
broken inside, in the shadows I hide
my heart broken my soul slowly dying.
I feel the cold of winter when it's only june
and the nights pass by me with no moon.
Ugly am I always will I be
but for once can you look past my flaws
and then truly see the real me.
Masking my pain with a false smile
crying out for help but no one hears me
just a simple hello would make my day
worth while.
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2005-12-16 15:22:30]
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Re: So Alone
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 04:30:12 PM AEST
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| interesting write |
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Re: So Alone
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by marie on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 04:59:46 PM AEST
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wonderful. i can really relate to the last stanza
"Masking my pain with a false smile
crying out for help but no one hears me
just a simple hello would make my day
worth while. " |
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Re: So Alone
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 03:05:55 AM AEST
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there's always someone out there.
trust me.
lost one pin
find massive gold.
I believe there is one pot of "gold" waiting for you.Go find it.
cheers,
-glass |
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Re: So Alone
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:11:21 AM AEST
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very sad but interesting write! thanks
for sharing it! |
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Re: So Alone
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by Devils-confused-daugther on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 08:12:07 AM AEST
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| hey i lik this poem its koool |
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