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Hell has got a little girl
Contributed by
zer0
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 01:42:25 PM in AEST
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Hell has got a little girl,
They keep her on display,
They watch her comb her dolly's hair,
The demons watch her play.
Hell has got a little girl,
She's kept in her glass case,
They keep her from fiery hoardes,
Keep her from getting raped.
Hell has got a little girl,
They keep her locked away,
With teddies and blankies and snowglobes,
All kept there in her place.
Hell has got a little girl,
Don't ask me what for,
The only other thing i know for sure,
Is that Heaven's got a whore.
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 03:02:38 PM AEST
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This is an interesting poem. I have a question that you might could answer for me later... why do you think that heaven has a whore? It's a great write.
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by xFalling_of_Starsx on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 03:26:22 PM AEST
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| it's very clever, i love it! |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by chatabox on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 09:12:25 PM AEST
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| I would love to know what sparked this wonderful hellish poem. |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 09:57:11 PM AEST
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Hey Miles,
Great write you got here... like chatabox I would love to know what sparked it... reminds me of the movie "Nightmare On Elm Street IV: Dream Warriors" (I think that's right) =:) for some odd reason...
Always,
Dani |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by Terry_Stephen_Driscoll on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:36:14 PM AEST
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I agree with Daniela - Loved this too.
Terry |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by xFalling_of_Starsx on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 05:59:50 AM AEST
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| i know i already posted just had to say i think this is one of my favorites. |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by orgygirl on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 06:03:14 AM AEST
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| Im curious as to why heaven has a whore? |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by zer0 on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 09:46:33 AM AEST
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hey, thanks everyone, i'm glad you liked my poem so much! >:)
k, last question first. what did inspire me? indeed. i don't really know, i was feeling all spaced out when suddenly this idea just popped into my head from the middle of nowhere, the first few bits, then the rest i added right after. i guess i'm just sick and demented. it could have something to do with misfits lyrics picking away at my sub-conscience tho.
ginsdance and orgygirl, why does heaven have a whore? simple, cause for every action there is an equal and opposite reaction. hell has got a little girl and heaven's got a whore. now imagine re-writing this poem what it says, but starting with the whore in heaven, and what would be said…
like the eyes on the yin and yang, or the belly-button apparent on both humans and fruit, the point of entry, the gate, the seal, origin, or every mold - be it plastic or concrete or clay - has a hole somewhere, every casting has a seam. wherefore else could it be cast, or the product be created? the only perfection is not-anything, everything is flawed. anything that exists does not – can not exist exclusively unto itself. just as no man is an island, so is not anything else for that matter, or, if it were we would not be in any way be related to us, nor would we be affected by it, or add affect upon it, directly or indirectly, not now or ever. so if there were such a thing it would have absolutely no bearing upon our existence and so would be of absolutely no consequence. where is the hole in our reality? it’s pointed a direction away, but also towards us. perpetually it is shrouded, in and as the future, and that still yet to come, so always being present, but never being upon us. there is the navel of this existence, the stem of this fruit, the origin or this reality. i guess i could babble for ever. but i won’t. this time.
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 03:41:55 PM AEST
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Thanks for the answer! It makes sense! I really enjoyed this poem (just thought I'd say it again) and you are really talented. Looking forward to more of your work!
*ginsdance* |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by Clarity on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 10:58:03 PM AEST
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loved this!!!!! this is defintely one of the best poems i've read! looking forward to more.
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by orgygirl on
Saturday, 27th July 2002 @ 09:39:36 AM AEST
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| I really like this poem, I'll have to agree with everyone when I say it's definetly one of my favorites! |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by MisterRight on
Friday, 23rd August 2002 @ 06:32:50 PM AEST
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| That truely is a great peice of poetry!!! |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 12:07:53 PM AEST
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| wow that was really good! you wrote it very well. i love it! keep writing |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by cryingonmyporch on
Friday, 6th September 2002 @ 12:07:22 PM AEST
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I like it I can't write like this
hope to read more from you
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by viola on
Wednesday, 25th September 2002 @ 10:55:39 PM AEST
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| this is pure genius. I really love your devious mind. |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 05:24:52 PM AEST
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| sorry but i don't like it maybe i didn't get the picture or maybe i did but i like heaven and i think it's more like hell being a whore! |
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 02:28:29 AM AEST
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i love this poem sooooo much!!!!!
well done
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Re: Hell has got a little girl
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:04:22 PM AEST
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interesting yet great. i loved this great job
X+X christina X+X |
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