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She's Dark and Deep and Dead to Me
Contributed by
grey_matters
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:50:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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A kiss in the wind,
escaped from your lips,
a feeling so fine,
I tasted the sky,
it cured my disease, to my suprise,
I coughed up a breeze,
that cleared up the sky...
She's so dark, and deep, and dead to me,
She's the hole, that grows, to take me home...
A face in the cloud,
was bringing me down,
as it floated away,
a dazed break of day,
all lined with silver, it helps to define,
this is just filler,
color outside the lines...
She's so dark, and deep, and dead to me,
She's the hole, that grows, to take me home...
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2005-12-16 14:50:40]
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Re: She's Dark and Deep and Dead to Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 08:52:27 PM AEST
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This paints a fine picture. I like that refrain especially. Good work!
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Re: She's Dark and Deep and Dead to Me
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 02:56:40 AM AEST
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I think its a really great way of summarizing up what happens in our life...the people we meet and love, the people we just seem to dislike.I really like it.
cheers,
-glass |
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Re: She's Dark and Deep and Dead to Me
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:32:11 AM AEST
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| brilliant, well done |
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