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A Love
Contributed by
ms_me
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Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:31:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Whoever knew that love could cause so much heartache?
A love that was so deep that it caused the earth to shake.
A love so pure, it was beyond the color white.
A love so magical that it gave me future insight.
A love that burned deep within my soul.
A love that would never go untold.
A love so beautiful it caused the darkness to turn to light.
A love that comforted me all through the night.
A love that when taken away;
Caused the fire to extinguish in just a single day.
Copyright ©
ms_me
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2005-12-16 13:31:12]
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Re: A Love
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 01:47:52 PM AEST
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This is sad...geez...I was kind of counting on a 'I'm-happy-in-love' write...lol...Don't get me wrong, I enjoyed this piece, rather alot, actually. You said so very much in so few words. I hope love's kinder to you next round...Welcome to ypdc : )
Scorp.
(Who knows this kind of love quite well, and wishes she could've expressed it so poignantly) |
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Re: A Love
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:14:24 PM AEST
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well thats the greatest thing about love its never the same great write
r.m.wilder |
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Re: A Love
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by Artemis03 on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
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| ::sniffles:: Don't ya think LOVE is just a candy coating for the word PAIN.....I know I do. Your poem was very beautiful |
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Re: A Love
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by LostAmbition on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 02:15:13 AM AEST
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i agree with scorp here
this is really good
but very sad too
i like the positive
mixed with the negative
Good poem
keep up the poetry :D |
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