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loud
Contributed by
jessalynn
on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 10:49:15 AM in AEST
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Run away little boy
run and hide
dont you dare
tell my lies
I'm sorry my eyes
are full of rage
No
dont silence yourself
be loud scream your pain
don't go away
It will never be the same
Sad and pathedic
little me
shut me away
never to be seen
I'm sorry I
can never be you queen
I thought you
knew me
violently mean
broken now
scarred much to deep
I know now your
not that weak
show you hand
make me scream
loud and cold
don't be decieved
Copyright ©
jessalynn
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2005-12-16 10:49:15]
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Re: loud
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 02:28:47 PM AEST
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interesting write could be placed better but it works
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Re: loud
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Saturday, 17th December 2005 @ 03:02:51 AM AEST
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I can relate to this.
I am 15 now.
thats why, I guess.
cheers,
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