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Dear God
Contributed by
parkman
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Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 05:10:07 AM in AEST
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Dear God
I thank you for my life, of solitude
Did I miss the prelude?
For the companionship I have
My own, what a laugh
For showing me your power, your glory
What a weak feeble story
Your book I shall forever keep
A fairytale to get kids asleep
The voices constantly in my head
From a lord, long gone dead
Will keep me onward bound
In this hell I have found
Dear James
I gave you life, from the very start
I gave you love, deep in your heart
Companionship I offer, to you my son
With open arms, your life’s just begun
Have faith in me, follow my path
The voices will cease, so will their wrath
You are gifted, with a love that you share
Yes you show people, that you really do care
Reread my book, a fairytale no
My words to you, is all it will show
New friends you’ll make, each new day
Happiness you’ll share, no more dismay
Dear God
Thank you for your time, your words so kind
But my own path, is what I must find
My own book, I have written
In my mind, forever smitten
Locked in my room, I am the king
The world outside, is frightening
Where I will go, I do not know
The road shall lead, to my final show
Reserve a seat, come and watch me
I promise one thing, a splendid finale
Amen
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Re: Dear God
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by little_genna on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 07:55:25 AM AEST
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At first I werent sure where this poem was going.... then it just took hold of my imagination... but im still not sure where it lead me.... i like it very much though...you certainly are a talented writer
god bless |
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Re: Dear God
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by Shmokin on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 09:08:57 AM AEST
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| trally good format, enjoyable read thanx for sharin :-) |
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Re: Dear God
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by sandypoet on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 10:40:33 AM AEST
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WHAT I think......God response would be.
James:
I give you a choice to follow me or not,
The road you choose is there,
But when you walk down the wrong road of life,
Always know I am still there.
You may not want to listen to me,
You have your own way,
But never forget I love you,
I CAN always make a way.
So you go ahead in front of me,
You walk down that road,
But remember always,
I am not that far behind..
I hope you know. |
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Re: Dear God
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th January 2006 @ 06:51:08 PM AEST
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| Yes He is opportunity and can change your life. Wonderful write.. Raquel Leah |
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Re: Dear God
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by boobiepeach on
Friday, 3rd March 2006 @ 12:04:17 PM AEST
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WOW very powerful. this is a great write.
peach |
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