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You've Erased Me

Contributed by JasTrask_22 on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 10:12:12 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



You’ve Erased Me

this starts with a simple comment i heard from someone earlier tonight..i heard your ‘memory box’ means nothing to you..the one that i didn’t give you?.. i guess your new friends are way funner than me.. into drinking and parties and everything.. but they prolly wont know every little thing about you.. and your parents prolly dont love them as much as they loved me.. of all the fun times we’ve had together.. i remember them all.. but you’ve just erased me totally.. it was like we were never really friends. like i was just another one of your guinea pigs to get to the top right? well guess what! once you’re at the top.. you wont have anyone to go to on the way down.. i thought i could be the one to catch you when you fall.. or when you need someone to go to.. but im gonna treat you the same way that you have been treating me.. it’s like im not even there when you’re with “THEM” ..whoever THEY are! i wont get to go camping with you ever again.. i wont get to see Wally.. or say hi to your dad on the phone.. or pick up my phone when you call me from work.. or have the funnest times at new years like i did with you in grade nine.. do you ever think about the memories? when i would always come to your house, and you would come to mine.. watch movies, go on msn. and you’d go home at 6 in the morning. i miss not seeing you there in the morning. that’s what i always knew about you. it took us an hour to get down to the fishing area... soo stupid, but the funnest time ever.. i dont even know you anymore.. but i know that i don’t like it.. i wish that you could see.. i am so much better than those “plastics” can be.. it’s just not fair that they get to have inside jokes with you while im on the outside.. people would think of you as the bad person.. but i would never get that from you.. it wouldn’t rub off you onto me because i liked the fun in you.. without the alcohol and partying, i would also always try to tell you things, that really meant something.. and you wouldn’t understand until your mom told you about it. i wish we could go back to the old times.. i wish i could still be your friend.. and we could hang out sometimes.. only when you really want to though.. im too scared to tell you.. cuz i dont know how you’ll react, i don’t know you anymore.. i guess i never really thought about us never hanging out anymore.. so it looks like you were always one of THEM.. the fake jokesters, our jokes were real.. all of the laughs and great times.. i guess they meant nothing to you.. cuz now.. im erased from your memory. you’ve erased me totally.


--jas.mine ;;_ ' *




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Re: You've Erased Me (User Rating: 1 )
by JasTrask_22 on Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 10:16:38 PM AEST
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sorry.. my best friend didn't pass away or anything, she just stopped being my friend!

from --jas.mine ;;_ ' *


Re: You've Erased Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Minus_Blindfold on Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 10:56:58 AM AEST
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My best friend dropped me for some guy...*****




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