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Crossover
Contributed by
Willofree
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 08:52:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Once on the right becomes left
Leaving a void where right did reside
Now on the other side
The view has changed tremendously
Upon what does the focus concentrate
A misty vision emerges from the cloud
A figure transparent,
Yet opaque enough to see
Is this a spirit from the other side
Walking, no floating, toward me
I feel tremulous and frightened inside
My thought, Oh my god, am I going to die
Is this the angel of death
Who has come to cross me over
Did I ever communicate with them;
The spirits who transcend the bridge of the abyss
In search of their specified selection
An empty space was left behind
As with the spirit I left, behind was to the right
No looking back now
As another dimension I am in
What lies before me, only the spirit knows
I stand in awe of what is facing me
And pray for forgiveness
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Willofree
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Re: Crossover
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by jessejames on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:47:42 PM AEST
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good job
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Re: Crossover
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 08:20:00 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write. The truth does not use signs or symbols. Follow the truth, in your heart. Bless you and yours. Raquel Leah |
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Re: Crossover
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 05:39:09 PM AEST
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I'd say this is a fairly good first attempt at dark poetry. It's even better because it's based on a fear that is quite real for many (if not most), and you handled the subject rather well. Don't be afraid to write another 'dark' poem in the future: )
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