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Pritt Stick
Contributed by
Shmokin
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:11:40 PM in AEST
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Pritt Stick
Twiglets, pritt sticks
Stale and sticky old
Odd socks, hair bands
Tissues - reminder of a cold
Fluff balls, yoghurt pot
musky smell pervades
curled up something sandwich
Of midnight feast, tells tales
A voyage of discovery
Beyond my normal domain
It'll be at least another year
Before I clean under that bed again
XShmokinX
Copyright ©
Shmokin
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2005-12-15 19:11:40]
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Re: Pritt Stick
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:41:40 PM AEST
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Very cute. U have me laughing.
huggs,emy |
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Re: Pritt Stick
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by Mangos on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 09:01:40 PM AEST
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sounds like you need to pay a maid, or cleaning service
nice write here
i think your messy room is inteded to tell a bigger story for you in your life |
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Re: Pritt Stick
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 10:32:43 AM AEST
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Cool! I like this heh, reminds me of what my room has looked like before.
Take care.
Scott |
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