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Could this be the only way?
Contributed by
RAGEyourDREAM
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 06:48:39 PM in AEST
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SongLyrics
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The voice of the screaming ambulance vanishes
and suddenly my childish days are revived in one broken piece.
Certainly this world is just a moment and
I'm alone in it any ways, dissolving in the time.
I don’t want to meet my fate today, so
inside my bed I close my eyes
I’ll stay admiring my dream.
Could this be the only way?
It’s hard to hide and forget when
The shadows of the trees are shining
within my room’s white walls
and the morning sun burns from outside my window.
A new day has to begin, revealing myself from the covers,
my worries become nothing, just like that.
I let my fingers caress the glass, looking out I feel so dizzy.
The world is buzzing around me, while I idly watch.
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2005-12-15 18:48:39]
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Re: Could this be the only way?
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 03:57:23 AM AEST
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amazing
certainly it a raw nerve with me
well done
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Re: Could this be the only way?
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Sunday, 25th December 2005 @ 10:01:55 PM AEST
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this is not a bad write but for song lyrics there should be some type of rhyme even if only near rhyme but it is a good write and think about a chorus also
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