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The Interpretation Of Dreams
Contributed by
Jyssvw
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Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 06:21:05 PM in AEST
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A simple man will tell you
that dreams are born in your head
A preacher may even convince you
God put them there instead
The psychologist who treats you
suggests that your repressions are dead
An eccentric artist who paints your dreams
in all shades of the color red
Some would argue
your environment implants genetic codes to be later encrypted
Unfulfilled fantasies of the day,
manifesting in a dream, fully completed
A chemical reaction, still unknown,
a divine production, built to specifications sublime
A dream slowly forms,
in the depths of the mind,
as an explosion of time rewinds
Rapid eye movement
the subconscious journey commences to transmit
A flyby image, so lucent and transparent,
if you could awake, you no doubt would feel it
Thus, craving dreams, in this paralyzed condition,
is habitual and highly addictive
Dreams that satisfy your inhibition,
all instinctual, the friction, no longer captive
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw
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2005-12-15 18:21:05]
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Re: The Interpretation Of Dreams
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by Shmokin on
Thursday, 15th December 2005 @ 07:30:05 PM AEST
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| Brilliant opening line,, nice piece enjoyed the read, thanx for sharin :-) |
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Re: The Interpretation Of Dreams
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th December 2005 @ 04:54:57 AM AEST
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Hopefully that 'paralyzed condition' is merely temporary...This isn't your first poem discussing dreams/sleep patterns. I know this is a topic that fascinates you, and it is a fun one to comtemplate. I wonder if we'll ever truly find out what causes them, and the proper interpretation, etc. Would be nice, wouldn't it?
Nice job with this write, and expressing your thoughts on the subject.
Scorp.
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Re: The Interpretation Of Dreams
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by LostAmbition on
Sunday, 18th December 2005 @ 02:09:32 AM AEST
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i love dreamin
i dont remember them much tho
good poem about an interesting
subject
Keep up the good work :D
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Re: The Interpretation Of Dreams
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by 8kiwi8 on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 09:15:43 AM AEST
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| wow, that was weird (and very well done) how you wrote a poem about dreams and used scientific explanations etc in it...well done:-) i like it. |
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